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An overall nice piece, my main complaint would be that her mouth is a bit hard to make out to an extent. The piece is mild-mannered, but for a sketch-based piece that isn't all that unexpected. Your color usage and shading are well done here, and it is very cute in general. The slight addition to the background personally caught me off guard at first (the two corners you added to), but it isn't overly troublesome and the confusion fades fast. I especially like the details on the dress and the way you noted the shadows under her feet. Over all, well done. Just the few issues I noted, which are minor at most anyway. I figured critiquing the earlier versions would be silly when the finished product is already here.
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